A world ruled with religious unity.... A world where the strong strive.... A world where the darkest order has control.... A new world that devoured the old.... Which world would you choose to go to?
You could join the Night Mercenaries. The only person there at the moment, I don't have faith in that person actually competing since I know him in real life. Plus your character would then be free to take any job they would want and get a huge paycheck for winning.
Me, and the reason why I invited you to join is because we're looking for people to join and you did asked Gat about the group awhile back. I'm sorry if it's inconvenient.
Ok, I see what you're doing here, and as another has said, grammar wise, it could use a little work, it seems ok. What do we do next? Write a blurb about a character, add to the details of the world, what?